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geschrieben am: 27.12.2003 um 19:19 Uhr
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I canŽt bear this pain longer
the wounds, wich you added to me,
would never heal
I will be able to never live in such a way,
as I wish it to me
not even in my nicest dreams,
I see myself lucke or smiling
ItŽs like today without tomorrow
the night triumph over the days
and I canŽt feel nothig more
if my soul became cold,
I feel, how I cameundone slowly
the end is near
shadow over me
my cold breath stand still...
dead
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geschrieben am: 28.12.2003 um 00:54 Uhr
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| Sternchen, ohne an deinem Gedicht inhaltlich herumzumäkeln, aber an deinem Englisch solltest du noch etwas feilen. |
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