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Word by word (schut up)

Nutzer: orla
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geschrieben am: 25.01.2005    um 21:30 Uhr   
Word by word I die
Your promise, your story just lie.
shut up
Only one wish grows now in me -
destroy my gloomy memory.

Word by word you intend
to pull me by your side.
Restansless you forced by me -
but I feel no longer fear to fight
and fetsh back all I spend
untill IŽm free again, untill the end.

All you take away from me
was an exploitation, a theft,
without right and authority.


Word by word I realize
the reason for what it concerns.
The way you want me by your side -
approching a sad ending in misery
... IŽm tiered

Word by word I see your envy to me
lying in your eyes and burns.
The never-ending darkness you like to slide
makes me realize my turns.
... wanna hide

Whatever makes me
follow you first - itŽs gone.
All I can do - done.
Sad to see you convinze, you win.
Worry about , you become sin.
Now all my duty leave -
darkness is your, light my belive.
And all the feelings shows there real face.
Your side is not my meant place.

Word by word I die
Your promise, your story just lie.
shut up
Only one wish grows now in me -
destroy my gloomy memory.

Make your way, wehrever he steer.
Dark, lonelyness and overbearing
sounds in every word I hearing.
IŽm ready to close my eyes, my ears, my mind.
Without light I notice you are blind.

Unnecessary, unfounded all the fear.
Light and confidens was still here.
... now, every thing Žs clear

Word by word I die
Your promise, your story just lie.
shut up
Only one wish grows now in me -
banish my unfortunate enemy.

...

Word by word
canŽt you see
So many words
but never a secŽ for me
Shut up!

Shut up!

.

sorry for my bad english ^.^"
Geändert am 28.01.2005 um 09:50 Uhr von orla
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Nutzer: starchaser
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geschrieben am: 26.01.2005    um 18:13 Uhr   

da kehrt wohl jemand den stall aus ? *g
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Nutzer: TysanNiskow
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geschrieben am: 27.01.2005    um 19:36 Uhr   
Naja. Bei manchen stellen muss man halt doch hart auf die Zähne beissen wegen dem Englisch... S*c*hut up find ich, ist auch ne tolle Wortcreation :-)

Aber das Konzept iat gut, sind n paar schöne Sätze drin.

*knirschend*

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Es fällt nicht schwer, zu leiden, es fällt nicht schwer, zu sterben, wenn man einen Sinn darin sieht.
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